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Rain

By jewess

I smelled rain on my way back home. Its smell is intoxicating to me… It smells of early morning and late evenings blended into one… It has velvety touch, and soothing embrace…

This entry was posted on June 16, 2009 at 10:01 pm and is filed under Everything and Nothing. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

6 Responses to “Rain”

  1. Deena Says:
    June 27, 2009 at 8:58 pm

    LOVE it.

  2. Do I need rain? « Deena's home online Says:
    June 27, 2009 at 9:13 pm

    [...] My friend also just wrote about rain. Read it here. [...]

  3. jewess Says:
    July 6, 2009 at 12:15 am

    I am curious to know what exactly did you like in my description of rain? And by the way, saying “All of it” doesn’t count! :P ~~~

  4. Deena Says:
    July 14, 2009 at 7:28 pm

    Sheesh! The pressure. I am not artsy nor into poetry and I am very bad with descriptions. So, I don’t know. I just liked it. I love the rain and so do you and I like how you talked about it. It’s peaceful.

    I guess I liked it because it felt true to me.

    Did I pass the test? :)

  5. jewess Says:
    July 15, 2009 at 12:17 am

    I am all about putting pressure on people :P ~ Sometimes that is the best way to draw people outside their shells! And to be perfectly honest I enjoy watching people squirm, a perverted sense of pleasure on my part. JOKING!

    I am merely curious to know what it is about my posts that draw people in. It helps me to see my posts through someone’s else, and enriches my own perception of my writings.

    See, no test!

  6. Deena Says:
    July 15, 2009 at 3:01 am

    I know you don’t mean it as a test. I have had someone else ask me what I like about their writing and I had the same feeling, even though it was also just coming from that place of wanting to know what people like and why.

    Sorry! I just don’t know what to answer to those questions. I am getting the idea, especially from the awesome book I’m reading right now, “The war of art,” that we can never really know what our art is like for the person experiencing it and it doesn’t actually matter… It’s interesting how true that is! We may have an idea of if someone is enjoying our art and maybe they’ll try to tell us why, (saying things like, “It feels so peaceful,”) but we still can’t really know.

    K, I’m being very annoying. So I’m gonna go now.

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